Reply To: Carpark management contract

Replying to my own article. My first paragraph reads very badly. It should say. ..

It is mentioned in the minutes of inaugural meeting that a car park manager will be appointed. It is a multi-use development. The appointed manager of the private residential car park turns out to be the owner of 2 levels of retail carparking on the same site. This carpark manager also owns the Owner’s Corporation .

This sets the scene better than how my story presently starts.