Here’s what I have learned from 40 years as a journalist, author, TV scriptwriter and university lecturer – in every regard, if you can’t make your point in the first couple of paragraphs it doesn’t matter how much authoritative information you provide because your readers have moved on to something less boring or challenging or more relevant to them.
That’s why I suggested that you make your point concisely and add links to the material. I even made the links for you. Anyone who’s interested just needs to click on the links and they can read the whole thing.
Your screeds of copied and pasted legalese made me seriously consider putting a word limit on posts … or even just deleting them. But you are as entitled to express a point of view as anyone.
I’m sorry I don’t achieve your benchmarks for legal comprehension, but I’d prefer to have the very few things I do know expressed in a way people understand, rather than lost in a morass of verbiage.