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    Really need to get a place ASAP, is there anything I’ve mentioned which might be the wrong thing to say?

    What can I add to help improve my liklihood of being accepted?

    To whom it may concern,

    I have attached this cover letter to help you learn a bit more about me and my circumstances.

    I am currently studying a Bachelor of Science at the University of Melbourne, but I’ve decided to take a leave of absence for next year, in order to properly sit down and think about the majors I wish to enrol the following year. In addition, during this time I’ll be working hard in order to save up as much money as I can, before going back to Uni.

    I am interested in your rental unit because it is perfect for my needs, as I’m simply looking for a small, affordable place to live when I’m not at work. I’m new to the Melbourne area, however I’ve found employment with the COLES group at their BWS stores, I am also looking for another job to help me save a little faster, in the mean time I’m receiving a job seekers payment to ensure rent is covered.

    I understand that by entering into a tenancy, I will be taking on legal responsibilities. As your tenant, I am aware that I will need to:

    • pay the full rent on time,
    • not unreasonably disturb others,
    • care for your property, and
    • otherwise follow the Residential Tenancy Act and the terms of my tenancy agreement.

    I am looking for a stable tenancy and hope that you will consider my application. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me.

    Sincerely etc etc,

     

Reply To: Applying for rentals: How does this cover letter look? Advice please!
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